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第一部分：核心词汇与句型 (Vocabulary & Sentence Structures)

要写好折线图，你需要掌握四类核心表达：描述趋势、描述变化的程度与速度、描述图中的关键点以及比较不同线条。

1. 描述核心趋势 (Describing Key Trends)

这是折线图写作的根基。你需要能够灵活使用动词和名词来描述各种趋势。

A. 上升趋势 (Upward Trend)

• Verbs (动词):

  1. increase: The number of visitors increased significantly.
  2. rise: The price of oil rose to $80 per barrel.
  3. grow: The population grew steadily over the decade.
  4. climb: Sales figures climbed in the second quarter.
  5. go up: The consumption of electricity went up during the winter.
  6. rocket / soar / surge: (用于描述急剧上升) The ticket sales surged just before the event.
  7. jump: The figure for investment jumped to 10 million.
  8. experience an upward trend: The economy experienced an upward trend.
  9. show a growth: The company’s revenue showed a significant growth.
  10. double / triple: (翻倍/三倍) The number of users doubled from 2015 to 2020.

• Nouns (名词):

  1. an increase in: There was a steady increase in the number of cars.
  2. a rise in: The graph shows a rise in unemployment rates.
  3. a growth in: We can see a gradual growth in the demand for housing.
  4. a climb in: The chart illustrates a climb in the average temperature.
  5. a surge in: The new policy led to a surge in foreign investment.

B. 下降趋势 (Downward Trend)

• Verbs (动词):

  1. decrease: The amount of rainfall decreased over the summer.
  2. fall: The literacy rate fell slightly.
  3. drop: The percentage of students choosing science subjects dropped.
  4. decline: Manufacturing output declined year on year.
  5. go down: The crime rate went down after the new law was implemented.
  6. plummet / plunge: (用于描述急剧下降) The company’s stock price plummeted.
  7. dip / slip: (用于描述轻微、短暂下降) The temperature dipped at night.
  8. experience a downward trend: The industry experienced a downward trend.
  9. show a decline: The number of marriages showed a sharp decline.
  10. halve: (减半) The production of chemical fertilizers halved in five years.

• Nouns (名词):

  1. a decrease in: The chart indicates a decrease in traditional media consumption.
  2. a fall in: There was a noticeable fall in public transport usage.
  3. a drop in: The company reported a drop in profits.
  4. a decline in: The period saw a decline in the birth rate.
  5. a dip in: A slight dip in sales was observed in August.

C. 平稳与波动 (Stability & Fluctuation)

• Verbs & Phrases:
  1. remain stable/steady/constant: The figure remained stable for three years.
  2. stay the same: The price of the product stayed the same.
  3. level off / plateau: The number of visitors levelled off in the final two months.
  4. fluctuate: The exchange rate fluctuated throughout the week.
  5. vary: The temperatures varied significantly between day and night.
  6. show some fluctuation: The market share showed some fluctuation.
  7. be volatile: The stock market was particularly volatile during this period.
  8. be erratic: The pattern of rainfall was erratic.
  9. reach a plateau: The growth reached a plateau in the 1990s.
  10. hover around: The percentage hovered around 40% for the entire decade.

2. 描述变化的程度与速度 (Degree & Speed of Change)

将这些副词和形容词与趋势词结合，能让你的描述更生动、更精确。

• Adverbs (副词) - 修饰动词:

  • 大幅地: sharply, rapidly, dramatically, significantly, considerably, substantially
    • 例句: The number of internet users increased dramatically.
  • 平稳/逐步地: steadily, gradually, moderately
    • 例句: The unemployment rate fell steadily.
  • 轻微地: slightly, slowly, marginally
    • 例句: The price of milk went up slightly.

• Adjectives (形容词) - 修饰名词:

  • 大幅的: sharp, rapid, dramatic, significant, considerable, substantial
    • 例句: There was a dramatic increase in the number of internet users.
  • 平稳/逐步的: steady, gradual, moderate
    • 例句: The graph shows a steady fall in the unemployment rate.
  • 轻微的: slight, slow, marginal
    • 例句: We can see a slight rise in the price of milk.

3. 描述关键点 (Describing Key Points)

• 最高点 (Peak):

  1. peak at: The figure peaked at 5,000 in 2010.
  2. reach a peak of: It reached a peak of 5,000 in 2010.
  3. hit a high of: Sales hit a high of 5,000 units.

• 最低点 (Trough/Low Point):

  1. bottom out at: The percentage bottomed out at 15% in 2005.
  2. hit a low of: The number of applicants hit a low of 1,200.
  3. reach a trough of: The value reached a trough of 1.5 million.

• 起点和终点 (Start & End Points):

  1. start at / stand at: In 1990, the figure stood at 200.
  2. begin at: The period began with the number at 200.
  3. end at / finish at: By 2020, the number had fallen to 150.
  4. in the beginning/end: The number was 200 in the beginning and 150 in the end.

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第二部分：万能模板 (Universal Template)

这个模板专为折线图设计，重点在于描述“时间变化”和“趋势对比”。

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【段落一：引言 - 改写题目】

The line graph illustrates [在此处填入衡量的内容, e.g., the unemployment rates] in [在此处填入涉及的组群或国家, e.g., three different countries] over a period from [开始年份] to [结束年份].

• 备选句式:
  • The graph provides data on [在此处填入衡量的内容] for [在此处填入组群] between [开始年份] and [结束年份].
  • The chart compares [在此处填入组群1] and [在此处填入组群2] in terms of [在此处填入衡量的内容] over a [X]-year period.

【段落二：概述 - 总结最核心的总体趋势】

Overall, the most noticeable trend is that [在此处填入线条A的总体趋势, e.g., the figure for Country A experienced a significant upward trend], while [在此处填入线条B的总体趋势, e.g., Country B showed an opposite pattern]. It is also clear that [在此处填入另一个最显著的特征, e.g., Country C remained the most popular choice for the entire period / one line started at the highest point but finished at the lowest].

• 概述段黄金法则: 只写总体趋势（是升了、降了还是波动了），不写任何具体年份和数字。

【段落三：主体段一 - 描述第一条（或最重要的）线条】

Focusing on [线条A], it started at [起点数据] in [开始年份]. Over the next [X] years, it [描述第一段趋势, e.g., rose sharply], reaching a peak of [最高点数据] in [年份]. Following this, the figure [描述第二段趋势, e.g., declined gradually], eventually finishing at [终点数据] in [结束年份].

• 技巧: 像讲故事一样，描述一条线从起点到终点的“旅程”，包括它的转折点。

【段落四：主体段二 - 描述其他线条并进行对比】

In contrast, [线条B] began the period at a higher point of [起点数据]. However, it followed a downward trend, [描述B的趋势, e.g., falling steadily] to end at [终点数据]. Meanwhile, the figure for [线条C] [描述C的趋势, e.g., fluctuated over the period], starting at [起点数据] and ending at [终点数据]. Notably, [在此处加入对比句，e.g., the gap between Country A and Country B widened over time / Country C overtook Country B as the second most popular option in 2005].

• 技巧: 这一段的灵魂在于“对比”。一定要使用in contrast, similarly, while, whereas等词汇，并明确指出线条之间的交叉、超越、差距变化等关系。

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