我需要一个词汇和行文不是很复杂的版本,高中生水平,分数7.5即可。字数不要太多,要在220词以内,短小精悍。对于大多数考生来说,用自己能100%驾驭的语言,去填充一个100%有逻辑的结构,就是冲击7分及以上最可靠的路径。
核心结构:四段式
目标: 用自己的话重述题目信息。
公式: The given/provided + [图表类型] + [核心动词] + [图表内容]
chart(s)
, graph(s)
, diagram(s)
, table
line graph
, bar chart
, pie chart
, map
, process diagram
shows
-> illustrates
, compares
, presents
, provides information on/about
, gives data on
production
-> generation
; proportion
-> percentage
; number of people
-> figures for people
units of electricity production by fuel source
-> how electricity was generated from different fuels
示例:
The provided line graph illustrates the changes in the unemployment rate for three different countries from 1990 to 2010.
The given pie charts compare the proportion of online shoppers by age group in Canada in two separate years, 2015 and 2020.
目标: 提炼图表最宏观、最显著的2-3个特征。绝对不要写任何具体数字!
公式: Overall, [最主要特征一], while/and [最主要特征二].
开头连接词: Overall,
, In general,
, It is clear that
, As can be seen from the chart,
如何找特征?
示例:
Overall, it is clear that the consumption of chicken and beef both saw an upward trend, whereas the figure for lamb decreased over the period.
In general, computers were the most popular item among all age groups, while books accounted for the smallest proportion of sales for the younger generation.
目标: 将数据和信息分组进行描述,并进行对比。分组是逻辑清晰的关键! 分组原则:
1. 描述趋势 (Describing Trends)
趋势 | 动词 (Verb) | 名词 (Noun) |
---|---|---|
上升 | increase , rise , grow , climb |
an increase , a rise , a growth , a climb |
下降 | decrease , fall , drop , decline |
a decrease , a fall , a drop , a decline |
剧变 | soar , rocket , surge |
a surge |
暴跌 | plummet , plunge |
a plunge |
波动 | fluctuate |
a fluctuation |
平稳 | remain stable/steady/constant , level off |
a period of stability |
最高点 | peak at , reach a peak of |
a peak of |
最低点 | bottom out at , reach a low of |
a low point of |
2. 形容程度的副词和形容词 (Adverbs & Adjectives of Degree)
dramatically
, sharply
, significantly
, substantially
(dramatic, sharp, significant, substantial)steadily
, gradually
(steady, gradual)slightly
, marginally
(slight, marginal)句式组合示例:
The number of X **increased dramatically** from 100 to 500.
(动词+副词)There was **a dramatic increase** in the number of X, from 100 to 500.
(形容词+名词)3. 描述占比 (Describing Proportions - for Pie/Bar charts)
...accounted for almost half of the total.
(…占了将近一半)...made up the largest proportion, at 40%.
(…构成了最大比例,为40%)...constituted a small fraction, with only 5%.
(…只占了很小一部分,仅5%)The figures for A and B were 30% and 25% **respectively**.
(A和B的数字分别是30%和25%)a half (50%)
, a third (≈33%)
, a quarter (25%)
, a significant majority
(绝大多数), a tiny minority
(极少数)4. 高分连接词和句式 (Connectors & Advanced Structures)
Regarding X,
, As for Y,
, Looking at the details,
In contrast,
, By comparison,
, However,
Similarly,
, Likewise,
Initially,
(起初), Subsequently,
(随后), Over the following/next X years,
(在接下来的X年里)The figure for cars rose steadily, **while** the number of motorcycles fluctuated.
The sales of product A reached a peak in 2010, **with** product B **showing** a similar pattern.
approximately / roughly / about
(大约) 是你的好朋友。现在,你是不是感觉思路清晰多了?面对任何图表题,你都可以按照这个“四段式框架”,然后从“语言弹药库”中提取合适的词汇和句式来填充内容。
我们可以找一个具体的题目,用这个模板来实践一下,你觉得怎么样?